Form and structure are well used, so is the diction. The use of dialogue is especially apt. Fantastic stuff!

thanks!

This is really nice, I loved reading it~

Very nice! And you really did try something different with the formatting, it works!

I agree, the format is set up well. Emotion runs deep in this because weddings…well…cmon it’s a wedding haha. I liked it alot simply for it’s closeness to home with a friend of mine.