Heck of a crash from wonderful to ‘oh crap’. I’m tempted to read it as a metaphor for ‘pride cometh before the fall’, but I don’t think that’s really where you were going. I like the sweep of majesty before the crash to reality, whatever the intended meaning.

Thank you for reading my stuff first off. I take all of your feedback and try to get better so I don’t embarass myself. I left it open for anyones interpretation, but I do like your comment on it.