Writing is solid, and the dialogue was enjoyable, although you might consider shortening the thought part to improve flow. Overall, a well-written and heart-warming piece. Great stuff!

This is a great entry! An entirely selfless heart’s desire taken without regret.

Interesting twist, almost a mind f***. You’re posing this as someone who can only think about something so terrifying as coming to him in a dream. But he’s not dreaming. Strange, very strange. But really good too.

Your first sentence needs something other than a comma, : : . — ~ you get the idea, but not a comma

thank you 32, i fixed my err. it does look somewhat better haha.

i appreciate the feedback on this. yes it was a dream i had it it has haunted me ever since.

Uncertainty and sacrifice.

I remain supremely impressed by this entry, and it almost hurts that I couldn’t make it the winner.

Have my second place, and know that this ficlet is one to be proud of!