Because apparently I’ve been writing too much personal poetry and too little fiction. Guilty as charged =S … attempting a new series – I swear I’ll keep the parts of this one nice and short xx

Glad to see some new fiction from you :). I really want to get into the poetry, but I have never had the patience for it. Looking forward to more!

Thanks mate. I think poetry is difficult when you think about it. It’s almost a stream of consciousness – heart to paper without consulting your brain. It’s hardest to write when you actually want to write it. Pretend that you’re ignoring it and it’ll creep up on you and surprise you with inspiration. x

What a dark Ewan! I like how you manage to make him sound so jaded and cruel.

I love this. Ewan would make an extremely interesting narrative in a short story/novel.

Poetic prose! Metaphors, rhythm and diction are great, coupled with imagery makes a fantastic piece. The format is unusual but definitely suits the piece.

Yeah ab you really shine in this story.This sounds like a voice over for a movie a would love to see.

Very dark. If only he knew that even the most hardened men at war long for love. Nice start. I’m not sure where it’s going, but that’s okay.

Beautiful imagery and concepts with the archaeologists and zoologists… It was dark, and the protag is cool, but I was hoping to see some irony too, no big deal of course what do I know?