I will say I’m quite intrigued sir. My senses are tingling for a sequel.

Burning Man, there’s some weird shit that happens there……

I read this when it was originally written but didn’t have the time to comment…and back then I disagreed with the above comments and thought that it worked well as a stand alone part, but it seems that quite a series has developed from it.

Interesting concept, if a little crazy and weird. The dialogue was interesting too – hinting the beginnings of a strange relationship! Great stuff. I hope you guys keep going with this now … you’re making a good team!
Abby x

This has the slow unraveling of a mystery but the casual observance of crazy grounds it. It has that two-things-at-once feel, which makes it perfecto IMO.

For some odd reason, I never got the email for this entry. However, it’s a tale of a desire that promises a wild journey to come, and I must say it’s a great story.

Sunlight and intrigue. I admit that I didn’t quite know what to make of this at first, but after a few readings I got what you meant!

Thanks so much for entering.