Lol. I really like that you lightened it up. My first draft was much darker on the original, and it felt too heavy. Nice sequel, now I’ll have to see if I can come up with another.
It’s still dark, I gave it a dark comedy slant, some relationships are just too weird. My cousin use to go to Burning Man every year, oh the stories she could write, this Ficly is not all that unrealistic.
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neil kant