So did she drive into oncoming traffic or suddenly swerve off the road? Different sides of the road confuse me!

Really good little moment. I always love it when a long story is told in the character limit even though it only encapsulates a snap shot. I thought the first few lines were predictable…but then the rest unfolded like a mystery!

There’s only one character and only one event but this just has so many dimensions that it’s fascinating. Brilliant writing as always.
Abby x

I loved the steadily evolving reality that just got darker and darker and darker. Nicely played.

Minor edit, that last verb should be ‘choosing’…missed an O.

Fun stuff with lots of details hinted at amidst a cool visual.

Efficient writing, it’s pretty much impossible to not read this to the end.

Note: you use the word ‘hair’ in the first two sentences, threw me off a little.