Wow! Just wow. Girl, you have talent. Another beautiful outpouring of the heart. Your language is so concise, sentences so perfectly structured. And I keep thinking that you’re going to go wrong but you always swerve back into literary correctness.

I love the biblical reference … very clever! Your writing is very poetic and wonderful. Yes, I could pick faults in this but it’s just so…good! I don’t want to!
Abby x

I told you how much I loved this c: Very nice.

Really gooood!