Always great to see a sequel that resurrects a great old story. You misspelt ‘Mirander’ in paragraph 5 and I think that the third paragraph was a little slow for some reason…I’m probably in need of coffee.

Even though it’s a sequel, I think this piece works really well all by itself. Nice job.
Abby x

Point of contention, I mispelled the name on person as part of the speaker’s accent. So there.

Thanks for the comment and the correction :-P

Ah I see…I did suspect that at the time knowing how perfect your writing normally is! Sorry

The juxtaposition; traveling through space, and old problems still seem to follow mankind around, a lost dog.

This scores a big it my friend. Yet another in a long line of greatness!

As a dyed-in-the-wool Englishman, I can confirm that “Mirander” is how we say that name. The Welsh accent described would put even more of an “er” at the end than my own accent does.

It’s great to find out where my story is going now.

Nicely done, sir. I salute you.