On the first little section I would personally write ‘all still the same’ instead of ‘the same’. It would add to the rhythm. Also did you mean ‘eras’ to be plural because it doesn’t fit with the rest of that stanza.

Sorry…me going all ‘writer’ on your ass =) What’s the song? I don’t know it! It’d better not be anymore of that pop shit, bitch!!

Great to have you back here. Facebook chat me!!!! Miss you, Abby xxx

From where you are – Lifehouse…
Sort of pop :P
thanks for the advice honey :)
love you :) <3 xxxx

I thought it worked well. I’m not familiar with the song, but I like all the competing contradictions throughout. It fit the feeling, I thought.

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Thanks THX :) xxx