Lovely description of her anguish and pained hope in what is a bizarre and magical situation. Still, frustrated love comes through as a universal theme. Typo towards the beginning, ‘being’ should have an ‘s’ on it. Exciting stuff with lots of possibilities.

Thanks for the comment, THX! I changed it to “beings”.

Thanks for the prequel, it really added to the story and gave an explanation of the change without giving away too much information. I liked the love story aspect as well. Nicely done :)

Thank you thelostgirl, I’m delighted that you enjoy the prequel!