YES! Great job with the continuation of the story AND keeping it tied to the song! Epic!

I love the kind of ‘punchline before the joke’ moments. When you write that he put one hand on the windshield and one on the door, I have that visualization but no idea about his intent. The great use of vocabulary makes it real for me, “snorted”, “cloven”, “majestic”, etc.

I’m not familiar with this series, but you clearly did a great job in continuing it. I like the relationship between the two characters and it’s always nice to go against stereotypes – minotaurs are normally so nasty, and they don’t classically drive =)!

I loved the first paragraph. It really grabbed my attention, although I’m not familiar with the song – you clearly encorporated it well into the piece.
Nicely written,
Abby x