For those of you who don’t know who Hagar is:

http://www.hagarthehorrible.net/

Makes sense! Your last line is great.

I liked this alot haha!

Very nice tale – kind of cool for the winter time as well with the Norse setting! =) My pet hate is numbers written as numbers in literature. I don’t know why…it makes perfect sense. Anyhow, thought I’d mention it.

An interesting direction on the challenge. Great style as ever, wonderful writing. Thanks for entering.
Abby x

Changed the numbers stuff.