I like the inner voice that comes out here. There’s some humour and some sadness and some self-awareness which blends together nicely.

Awesome character voice here. Even without much of a physical description I could totally picture her and relate to her. Minor grammar point-should be “sombody’s” and not “somebodies”. Lots of story potential and a great character you’ve started here.

I likes this.

@THX – Acknowledged and edited. Thanks for keeping me on point.