Masterfully done! The intro paragraph effectively engages the reader with a common experience (who hasn’t admired the night sky?), and then continues till you insert the twist that re-orients our perspective in a clever, satisfying way. The technical terminology is also assumed in a very natural, unforced way, leading to a greater sense of suspended disbelief.
Didn’t see that coming, and I’d even glanced at the tags. The dialog probably could have gone in quotes, but that’s a minor formatting thing. Does raise a lot of questions, like why this guy is in the simulation but also aware of it. Neat stuff.
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