“And Death rode a pale horse…”

I can feel the slow build of tension. These stories are a great example of using sequels to create a larger narrative while keeping the individual stories dynamic and interesting.

Ooh yay another part! I love this series more than I can say. I think this could do with a little polishing and the lack of dialogue compared with the previous two installments make it a little more dull, for me.

‘pontificating oriface’ – this is just the highlight of my literary year, mate. Genius! =D

In fact, I’m liking it more the more I read it. Good build up – I think that it’s taken a slightly darker turn from the original comedy.

I’ll certainly keep reading wherever you chose to steer the ship of this sequel!
Abby x

I believe the correct spelling is “orifice.”

To be quite honest, the misspelling in the story made me think “oreo-face” and I’m now looking for something to snack upon.