this was way more desperate than mine.. but so true
[I was about to yell at you for having only one sentence… but it’s part of a challenge, so it’s alright..] This fits the challenge extremely well. It’s very desperate. It’s these kinds of sentences that I look for for my poems or songs. :)
Definitely meets the challenge requirement, this! I like the paradoxical feel: it’s in the fervent striving to escape desperation that the agony lies.
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)
Brebelles {LoA}
Coccinella