Are you setting this up for a sequel? It sounds like you definately could. I like reading these types of pieces, very original.

I knew what the challenge was all along (obviously) but I kept thinking something was going to go tragically wrong. Guess I can’t shake the negative. lolz. Very sweet…nice use of love being happiness. And ice cream =D.

The characters were very appealing. I liked the little use of calculation there too. Made the piece interesting.
Thanks for entering.
Abby x