Best one by far! keep them coming please.

There was me all ready for a mental trip to Rome sniff … It seems we have a bit of a journey ahead of us – good set out of the plot before it’s delved in to. I shall continue.
Abby x

Ah. Forgive me. I thought it might prove interesting for the protagonist to not go where she desired, and it might be a tension through which we could explore Bacio later on.
I’m also quite fond of Florence, and it doesn’t often get the exposure in fiction that Rome and Venice have had.

Most excellent! I shall see what I can add.. Quite an odd turn for my Bacio.. She has a website if anyone wants to check it out!

Dawnlilly.webs.com

“…in you he has found great interest.”

This intrigues me most about the story so far. Considering that these missions originate from a higher power, Bacio’s response of satisfaction makes me curious about what this interest will mean for her future.