OH BRAVO!!! Maybe one of the best poems I’ve ever read. Really good rhyme structure.

That’s a pretty heavy compliment. Thanks for thinking this piece is so deserving.

nicely done! The halting of the first lines and flow of the 2nd through 4th works well to aid the reader in thought. My favorite part is the humor at the end, however. Bonus Points!

Loved the rhyme. Loved the humor. And totally saw a brain in a vat questioning reality.