Wow! For me a man who beats women is the 2nd most disgusting creature on earth! I really liked this piece.

@Reaver: dare i ask what the 1st most disgusting creature is?

I have a little experience in this area and I know that freedom is true happiness – if only temporarily.

Very well written. I liked the characters A LOT – especially Frank, who I think she was a little mean to drop the evidence with =S

It’s kind of bittersweet methinks. But almost beautiful. Thanks for entering.
Abby x

I was wondering the same thing. I’m assuming murder?

Thank you, though! You both are too sweet!

If I expand the story, I’ll be sure to have her drop the evidence elsewhere because, yeah, throughout her ordeal, he was her friend. Due to the limits on text, though, I didn’t have room for her to go elsewhere, but I wanted to include their relationship and that dialogue.

Yeah, I agree that it will be more of a bittersweet ending, but that sheer relief, I assume, would cause such elation that when one hasn’t see how bad things can get, it is really difficult to experience.