Poignant and vivid.

I was momentarily confused, until I realized she hadn’t actually died, but was thinking about death.

Excellent images.

Very powerful, awesome sensory details. It even made me shudder a bit.

Thanks for entering!

Thank you G2 – nothing says success in the writing like not just a mental reaction, but a visceral one. :D

hey mason heroin feels like falling in love,standing up too fast, and orgasim all to the smell of the color blue.
almonds is syinide

I probably should have researched that point a bit before writing.

(By reading material by users, of course. :D )

lol i dont have that much experience i learned it from william s burroughs the king of the heroin high

well that and a dude in the fourth ward who went by bycycle mike

yeah i finally got that each paragraph was a separate thought.. which made for a powerful snippet of thought.

An intense exercise in evocative imaging; neatly executed within the challenge constraints.

I love the last line.

I like the short paragraphs, very direct and it makes it great to follow.