Poignant and vivid. I was momentarily confused, until I realized she hadn’t actually died, but was thinking about death. Excellent images.
Poignant and vivid.
I was momentarily confused, until I realized she hadn’t actually died, but was thinking about death.
Excellent images.
Very powerful, awesome sensory details. It even made me shudder a bit. Thanks for entering!
Very powerful, awesome sensory details. It even made me shudder a bit.
Thanks for entering!
Thank you G2 – nothing says success in the writing like not just a mental reaction, but a visceral one. :D
hey mason heroin feels like falling in love,standing up too fast, and orgasim all to the smell of the color blue. almonds is syinide
I probably should have researched that point a bit before writing. (By reading material by users, of course. :D )
I probably should have researched that point a bit before writing.
(By reading material by users, of course. :D )
lol i dont have that much experience i learned it from william s burroughs the king of the heroin high
well that and a dude in the fourth ward who went by bycycle mike
yeah i finally got that each paragraph was a separate thought.. which made for a powerful snippet of thought.
An intense exercise in evocative imaging; neatly executed within the challenge constraints.
I love the last line. I like the short paragraphs, very direct and it makes it great to follow.
I love the last line.
I like the short paragraphs, very direct and it makes it great to follow.
April Raines
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Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)
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Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)
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