Abby (LoA)

First long line ‘nit’ should be ‘knit’.

Very matter-of-fact style here. I like it. If this is going to be a series then the shortness of the first installment will definately get you some attention. I Good lay-out too. Adds to the definate logical theme you’ve got going on.

I really liked the little one line introduction, and the idea of a non-fairytale fairytale is very appealing. I am officially puzzled and intrigued.
Abby x

• Posted about 8 years ago.