Comments on Dear School, (Blown Over) by Abby (LoA)

Reaver19

WELCOME BACK abby damn! rhyme and flow was great. had a song-like quality which i enjoyed due to its movement. nice piece!
- Posted about 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Abby (LoA)

thank you! =) history essays and physics ISA’s have been occupying my time but it’s nearly the holidays so i’ll hopefully be sticking around. Thanks for the pencils!
- Posted about 8 years ago.
Rez Greetham

God I’ve missed your writing! <3
- Posted about 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Brebelles {LoA}

I like the shortness of the stances and the great flow. :)
- Posted about 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
THX 0477

Good exploration of your feeling states. My favorite was the stanze about ‘alone’, seemed the most telling, that despite all the anguish and bitterness and resentment the desire is still for the other person to stay.
- Posted almost 8 years ago.
Tad Winslow

I love it, Abby. It’s sad and all, but well crafted. I can relate a little bit here and there, and I enjoy the short bursts of rhythm. Could be a slam poem.
- Posted almost 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

I’ve missed you, Miss Wall. I hope the ISAs aren’t murdering you like they always did me.
I can relate. The staccato brings it through. That loneliness. Even words can be lonely.
- Posted almost 8 years ago.