Man this was deep. I love how you wrote in the first person with the alcohol. very clever. Pills and booze! What a friggin close to home entry infinity.

beautiful anthropomorphism. I like the idea that items care about their owners and are aware of harmful enemies.

A tragic little tale very beautifully expressed. I liked your structure – gave the piece a very poetical feel and made it nice and clear to read.

On the surface, I agree wtih Talon’s comment, but I don’t think the tone of the alcohol is genuine. It keeps encouraging the person to drink and drink, as though it thinks that they should die. It sounded too condescending to truly care about the drinker. This slyness definately creates more sympathy for the human character.

Very clever way of using dialogue. I especially liked the first three lines. Hey, this alcohol – character thing worked out well! Thank you very muchly for entering.
Abby x