That last line in the grand redeemer, isn’t it! By and large, this is an enjoyable piece, but not extraordinary.

But then……that last line reaches out and slaps you with awesomewickedincrediblezanywowness and makes me read the whole thing again.

lol, well, I wasn’t trying to be awesome, just trying to write SOMETHING so that I got the juices flowing again. Your compliment is humbling, thanks.

I love the last two lines :D It’s easy to forget how satisfying writing can be when you haven’t done it (recreationally) in a while.

Which is why we writers have to just WRITE. I don’t care if what comes out is crap at first, a warm up that feels like wordvomit. Once you begin, loosen up, it all comes so much easier. If you at least try to write something everyday, it will be so much easier to get the flow back.