So, you called it off, but feel bad that the person is hurting because of the tough love choice you had to make. I had difficulty figuring that out because you used ‘this’ at the end when you should have used ‘that’. “Not healthy for us to be THAT way” You ended it, past tense, it is over, ‘that’. Then you switch to present tense “don’t you know…” then past ‘have loved’, and then present ’i’m sorry’. whew! A mental workout. But I finally got it. I think…
Haha, thanks for pointing out these mistakes! I’ll have to come up with a few ways to change the present tense mistakes. And yes, you are correct on the ‘called it off’ :) I tried to portray it as best as I could. Unfortunately, I have gone through the exact same thing that I just wrote about. I had to call off a friendship with my friend. It’s been quite a while though since I thought about it and I decided to write my inner thoughts on it, and to ease some of the guilt I guess you could say.
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