Interesting take.

I like it.

Another sacrifice story, The flood, the garden, immaculate conception, a piece of fruit, holy wars and unholy wars. And still, these are told over and over again, least we forget. Are we ever going to make it through this age of lessons?

One remark: Some of the word pairings are phrases within themselves. “life like”, “comes to one day” (My mind perceives it as this god waking up, but I know the word would be “too”) and I’m a bit confused; are there two gods, one slew the other? Maybe defining each one would help, even capitalizing one would work.

Write on this was stimulating.