Yeah, that was a bad prank. :)

I like your line about the light. Somethings are so unbelievable, we can’t focus on them.

uh, yeah, I would love to hear this from the sisters point of view. I mean, she know who she was kissing for all three Mississippi’s right?

@Wes Schumaker

That’s a great idea!
I may just do that for a sequel!!
thanks!!

Disturbing, but amazing descriptiveness and imagination.

“My knees buckled, my lips went numb, and my insides were churning. My head spun when she parted but I felt empty.”
gahh. You write so vivid and sensory! I need to learn how to do this!!
And it seems like she knows who she’s kissing – she’s not wearing a blindfold, right? – but she still tangles her hands in his hair…
I tried making a prequel, but it doesn’t have good descriptive language.