Wow, this took me for a spin. I didn’t expect the ending. Great visual with the “dark shadows of rain drop trails.” Moving “Only one woman escapes.” down to a new line might help bring a greater drama to that detail. Very cool “noir” vibe going on here!
Wow, this took me for a spin. I didn’t expect the ending. Great visual with the “dark shadows of rain drop trails.”
Moving “Only one woman escapes.” down to a new line might help bring a greater drama to that detail.
Very cool “noir” vibe going on here!
Nuno Teixeira