Definitely have 2 sides here in one ficly, hard to do, and you did it! This is a macabre scene, terrifying, horrifying, and rightly chosen.

whoa. super intense.
I was definitely not expecting it to be her professor.
This is great though.

If you’re 18 and writing like this already, you have a great future. I’m on the fence if this should be marked mature or not. But I’m almost 50, I think I was very immature at 18, this is a very mature piece.

It’s not about a relationship between a professor and student, It could be any two people really. This is about two points of view. I’m deeply impressed by your take on it, she is in the process of being raped, he’s convinced he’s about to “make love” to her.

I thought this was deliciously written! It was definitely a darker piece, but I loved it. It’s a story I’d like to read more of.

Congrats on being featured, you deserve it :)

So this is the 1st Ficly I’m reading since my return to Ficly earlier today and I must say I’m so glad to be back and be able to read such great work like this.