This is really good. It’s confusing, but so is she, it flows well for me.

Very scary. A bit hard to follow in the transition, like 32^2 mentioned, but I think I got the point. I like the personification of the wind as a representation of all the imagined threats in this lady’s mind, if I understood this correctly.

I enjoyed being confused and yet being able to understand. The imagery and such was very good, and I just love the fact of how confused the old woman is; its quite interesting.