Abuse is no laughing matter! Although most is not as extreme as this, I just wanted to put it out there.

I found the last two lines to be contrived and predictable. Simple twists such as these are not artistic and profound: they are merely cheap, emotional devices to win the hearts of middle-aged house wives yearning to feel sympathy for others so that they feel they will reach heaven some day. You did successfully create the environment of an abusive home, although it was accomplished exclusively through the use of excessive profanity and with no real descriptive writing. Oh, and again: shock value isn’t real fucking writing. Tell me, how many times did Oscar Wilde write the words “…and then you’ll fuck me up the ass like a good little boy?” Not more than once, I can tell you that. All humor aside, this story relies of the crutch of emotional outrage and lacks any redeeming qualities.