I like the idea behind this.

It was funny, and you somehow managed to fulfill a challenge about a first and last time…by getting rid of it. Five writing utensils!

the story has a casual feeling to it but a very thought provoking concept. very cool!

Just great ficly writing. :) I agree with music girl, casual, but thought provoking. It is comfortable, but it sneaks up and presents you with magic.

I love the idea of some cosmic beings just lazily chatting in a coffee shop!

Very well written! I love the style, and the story is fun, too!

Wow. Really creative! You sure thought out of the box with this one. Bravo!

Wow. Really creative! You sure thought out of the box with this one. Bravo!