I’m so pissed off right now. very powerful imagery, very exacting in setting your scene, I can feel the bleachers drumming and a ton of thigh slapping.

I feel dirty and need a shower…

Excellent Job!

It’s like a nightmare! Good entry.

i saw this on youtube…wasnt very funny. but great entry though!

That’s freaky…way to go with the imagery and the plot!! Best of luck to you, bro!!

It’s got it all. Alliteration, suspense, emotion, mystery and a twist.

It’s got it all. Alliteration, suspense, emotion, mystery and a twist.

true story I saw new year eve top ten most disturbing thing…sad, traumatic, one would NEVER mentally recoup from such an instance, funny your imagination wrote such a thing. PERFECT imagery as if you were truly there!