Knew this was a vampire story from the first line! I guess in a way that made it predictable. It moves very quickly to the inevitable end. That is a good thing.

grr… i really want to hate this, since it’s a vampire story…

It was too obvious that it was a vampire story. All I could think about was Twilight, and the scene where Bella and Edward are sitting in a field or some crap. But I suppose that all the aggressive media towards Twilight, should not affect my judgement on your story.
However I do wonder how she knows the vampires name…what’s the backstory? Interesting…