Love it, especially the consequences-her ‘icy eyes’.

wow, beautiful. I love the descriptions and the dialogue is very thought provoking. i could imagine this turning into a very interesting story, i’d like to see a sequel :)

I love the dystopian society, where the city is dark and the suburbs sunny and carefree. I didn’t see this as sad and cold and hopeless, though. I guess if when you grew up you had to work in a cubicle, then it would be..