Creepy! Makes me want to know what it is and if they have a chance at all! The appearance of their enemy is also so suddenly surreal that I found myself waiting for it to be explained as some type of weird human pyramid or something.

Mighty-Joe Young, at your service.
I like your style of writing you are a very talented storyteller and i am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Wow. This is great! The whole thing unfolds with a sense of impending doom. Reading on…