Commentary: This is an entry for the Get Under My Skin challenge. Sometimes the best way to do that is to literally get beneath the skin.

Well done (as usual). I never liked living things inside other things like those parasitic worms that accumulate in pockets of flesh and can be pulled out. YUCK!

I wish I had as much to offer as you give me but I don’t. The one thing that stands out visually is the last three paragraphs all begin with ‘I’ and the last two begin with ‘I tried’. I’m not sure if it matters or not.

@Robert: It matters and I’ve made a change. Is it enough?

Absolutely.