This feels like you were holding in a guffaw all the way through and then on the last line you just couldn’t help but bray like a mad donkey on amphetamines.
Not sure if that’s what you were aiming for, but it made me snicker.
Surely I’m not the only one laughing? Perhaps comes from having watched the new Star Trek so recently and thinking there was no science behind the fiction.
Spiderj, don’t worry about dkscully and Daniel’s comments. They are good friends of mine and I’m chatting with them in another window. I dared them to give me a 1, which they duly did, with no hard feelings.
In truth, this is a rubbish piece of writing, but it serves to illustrate the point quite nicely, I feel.
As a long time fan of Star Trek (and sci-fi in general), I love this! You’ve definitely got the “pulling out of my (insert appropriate orifice here)” feel that I sometimes get watching ST, especially TNG. Nice one!