Love this picture as well, although I get a much different feel from it than you do. I think your imagery is powerful and the hints of love and betrayal permeate the works of yours that I have read. I don’t feel that I can add anything of value to poetry because of its nature is often subjective. That’s not to say there are no rules, I’m just not very familiar with them.
Brebelles {LoA} 
In Night's Arms 
Robert Quick 
Iris...Alone