Reminds me why I love poetry.

I loved how you made the story so peaceful! As I continued to read I felt really warm and sleepy inside, loved it!

Thank you both very much. A Ficly is fun to write, but poetry is too personal, your comments mean a lot.

Gorgeous poetry and a pensive sort of take on the challenge. There were bits I didn’t follow, but that’s poetry, isn’t it. Nicely done. Feels like something I would read in the ‘New Yorker’.

I like the imagery, reminds me slightly of Blake.