I like the message, even if you intend to depose god. Overall it felt like you were saying to hurl one’s self into life, live the adventure, and whatnot. I like that. Seems like a good poem to use as a battle cry or hang up in the kitchen.

It does speak of jumping into action rather than stagnate in boredom. :)

Short, simple, encouraging.

@ THX That’s kind of the beat I was going for :)

@ElshaHawk Thanks, glad you liked it.