Haha this is great, the writing is suspenseful and it flows well. Fantastic stuff.
I love this story! It draws upon nice traditions, an interesting concept, and oozes tension. I wonder why he chose to play chess of all games…
I love this story! It draws upon nice traditions, an interesting concept, and oozes tension.
I wonder why he chose to play chess of all games…
I think chess is a reasonable choice. You certainly don’t want to challenge Death to a limbo contest. He’s got no ligaments. Very tense and dramatic, and nice gradual reveal on the opponent being death as opposed to leading with it.
I think chess is a reasonable choice. You certainly don’t want to challenge Death to a limbo contest. He’s got no ligaments.
Very tense and dramatic, and nice gradual reveal on the opponent being death as opposed to leading with it.
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