Lovely with a sort of poetic feel to it that fit the scene just perfectly. A few missteps, like having ‘down’ twice in the same sentence. For the most part though, really nicely written with a good flow to it.

I like this alot. The whole story it felt like the main character owned the place but then the last part where she was just “playing house” completly makes it. this could also be a good starting point for a series. Why is she homeless? Does she do this often? Well done.