This ficlet is mostly just for me to practice proper form when writing dialogue, because I can’t seem to grasp where the paragraph breaks and punctuation need to be. Please give me feedback and pointers!! Thanks guys. :)

I think you nailed it.
Compared to the man in this story, I am not a stalker! Boy I needed that confirmation. Whew! I was getting worried…

hee hee.

Yep- nailed it. Good job! Now let’s work on tags.

(“Hmm.” She made it a point to provide more attention to stirring her coffee than was ever required.) Excellent line. It made me laugh. It works to describe her personality and how she looks and acts when her BS radar starts pinging. Welcome to Ficly :)

I really need to you sign that form…