I really like the message here. A lovely and sweet poem.

We just need to get Abby Wall to read it :-).

haha i have read her stuff and our poetry is stark contrasts from each other. interesting =)

I like the message as well. People need to stick up for what they believe in and love!

ooo a snake. You clearly have the upper hand. wisdom is superior. :)

This comes across as well thought out. But I like it because it hasn’t lost the honest, emotional punch that’s authentic to wearing your heart on your sleeve and responding in the moment.

The positive spin you put on these negative situations will serve you well. Keep doing what you’re doing. I fully approve!

I like and I don’t like it, but that’s good.

Why I like it: This person could be bad or good, the language fits for anyone in any situation, it doesn’t matter what the catalyst is. As long as this person feels wronged, it fits.

Why I don’t like it: This person doesn’t take responsibility for their part in this situation. But I don’t like it based on an emotional response, and that’s what poetry is supposed to invoke, emotional responses.

evoke, damn.