I do not think you are a smart*** for this sequel. I like it a lot, it is a twist on my original poem. Very cool, five pencils.

I love it so very much..
I don’t know if you did it on purpose, but your line length is 5, 7, 5, 7, 5, 5 which really gives power to your poem.
It’s like a double-decker Haiku!! ^.