Makes me wonder what he has to figure out… :D Thank you for entering!!

Typo ‘uknown’ should be ‘unknown’ 1st line of the 2nd main para. I first thought that perhaps the guy is married and that’s why he can’t go home straightaway…but that’s just what my head sprang up.

As always, great structure. Nice use of bold as well – appearance is really important in these short pieces. I thought you expressed the character’s emotion very well indeed, just how shaken he was.

I’m not sure if that very first comma is required. Great piece. Great title. Great tags.
Abby x

nicely done, the confession being rather personal, that he never really got over this girl.
I am thinking about perhaps him going to her and finding out she wasn’t the one that sent it! What heartache, what confusion!

alot of emotion packed into this one little story. well done.