A couple of spelling/punctuation errors. ’You’re’ should be ‘your’ ‘restors’ should be ‘restores’ The second line confused me. I think there should be a pause in there somewhere.
Still…I liked this a lot. It has a beautiful sense of hope to it, of future. It’s so refreshing to read something from the point of view of the saviour rather than the victim. Great phrasing and spacing. The last two lines especially were very touching. Good job. Abby x
Abby (LoA)